Wednesday, January 31, 2007

SAT Original Poem 1

Love You More
by
Alexandra Campos

Iwould cry myself to sleep at night thinking of how you hated me so.
I'd drown myself in my tears hoping that you would rescue me.
I would wait up 'til all hours of the night hoping for your call.
I tried to replace that thing in my heart called love.
While people ripped my heart out, I would wonder if you would help me place it back in.
But instead you'd fill it up with ideas of hatred, destruction, death, and more.
Making me feel like I shoud hate you so...but really love you more.

5 comments:

MYP ENGLISH8 said...

Alex,

I like that you use the last words of the poem as your title. You were very creative to make that choice.

I like the design of your page and appreciate that you posted your original poetry first.

Mrs. Basham

dark fearie said...

Alex, i LOVE this poem. It's so DEEP. this toally reflects our thing man, cool.

Kowareta Tenshi-Sama said...

the last words were nice. its must you wonder.

Kowareta Tenshi-Sama said...

i mean it must make you wonder, sorry about the last comment

Anonymous said...

i feel so touched by your poem, good job!!!